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Innocence


album: Timeline
genre: Country Gospel
Vocal Gender: Male
Tempo: Ballad
Lyrics: Click To View
streams: 5



Innocence

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davej56
06/03/25 12:49:29PM @davej56:

Beautiful song Bo!  My only nit is the lack of the word "Innocence," in the song.  Generally, you would name the song for the hook which is repeated.  So, "How Did You Know My Name," should be the name of the song, in my mind.  But Miley got away with naming her great song, "Flowers,": when that wasn't the hook to me. So, even naming a song is subjective.

In any event, great job!  I suspect this one will get pitched, because it will be hard to beat, in my mind.

Dave


Bofiddley
06/03/25 01:55:46PM @bofiddley:
Thanks for your liking it Dave!! And I appreciate the criticism. Believe it or not, I did title it “My Name” at one time, but changed it to “Innocence” as the theme is that of how the innocence of babes makes us stop and think sometimes. The word is in the chorus, although, as you pointed out, not the hook itself. So glad you liked it!
Slynn
06/04/25 06:46:04PM @slynn:
I love love this Bo, great job!
Bofiddley
06/04/25 07:34:01PM @bofiddley:
Thank you!
Bo Edwards
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