Hey JBell!...
06/22/25 01:24:05PM
By: JBell91

Hello Dave Johnson, thanks for taking the time to tell me a little about yourself, appreciate the kind words and support, still pretty new to this page so I maybe a little slow at first, so much...

Thank you so much! @slynn

Cold Night’s and A Lonely Sky

My heart melts in the heat

But I’ll Never Stop Loving You

A fork in the road...

So Let It Rain....so let it rain

Hey Danny, my second look at one of your songs.  Better format and easier to follow than the first song.  My only nit is that it's written more like a poem than a song.  Songs should be...

Hey Danny, this is the first song of yours I've listened to.  You've got some good lines in there, and lots of images, which is really important.  But I don't find emphasis on a hook, and I was...