In The Silence of The Night

I’m Seeking solace in the depths of time

it’s running through the corridors of my mind

The colors swirling, and the patterns intertwine

And I’m Lost in this haze, and I'm feeling so sublime

Tick-tock goes the clock, and it never seems to stop

The days turn to nights, while the minutes drop

And reality's just a blur, as the hours seem to flow

As I’m Caught in the rhythm, where will this time go?

In the silence of the night, I hear time's gentle sigh

In the whispers of the wind, its secrets softly lie

And through the corridors I wander, seeking what I'll find

In the dance of time's illusion, I leave my fears behind

…. I leave ….I leave my fears behind

Time, oh time, slipping through my fingers

Drifting away like the smoke in the air

Time, oh time, take me on this journey

As I’m Lost in the echoes, but I'm forever there

And the echoes of laughter, the whispers of regret

The moments of joy, and the moments I can't forget

In the silence of the night, I hear time's gentle sigh

In the whispers of the wind, its secrets softly lie

And through the corridors I wander, seeking what I'll find

In the dance of time's illusion, I leave my fears behind

In the silence of the night, I hear time's gentle sigh

In the whispers of the wind, its secrets softly lie

And through the corridors I wander, seeking what I'll find

In the dance of time's illusion, I leave….I leave

my fears behind….I leave ….I leave my fears behind

Written By: Danny Brushett

Copyright: May 2001-April 2024

Brush Music

Music & Vocals: AI Generator

Hey Danny, my second look at one of your songs.  Better format and easier to follow than the first song.  My only nit is that it's written more like a poem than a song.  Songs should be conversational in structure.  This is a bit of a mixture.  But as an example, if you were talking to me, would you ever say, "In the whispers of the wind, its secrets softly lie?"  You're writing like a poem to force a rhyme.  I recommend you put some lyrice in the Songwriter's Forum and work with other Songwriters to build your structure and format while making the songs talk conversationally.  You're a strong writer, and good with the concepts and visuals, but could use some improvement in layout of a cohesive story. Hope I get to work with you on some of your songs! And just because I believe it would help you, I recommend a book, "The Art Of Writing Great Lyrics," by Pamela Philips Oland.  I have read it several times, and probably should read it again.  I can still use some improving too!