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davej56
@davej56
07/04/25 12:45:03PM
23 posts

A. Kylie Ryan - Christmas Songs


Song Pitch 3 - Closed 7/3/25

Hello all!

Below are the selections for the above named pitch.

Selected songs are:

Song                                                             Member          

Merry Merry Christmas Day                Gary Clute

Congratulations to Gary for having his song selected!  And I thank everyone that submitted.

Again, there were issues with the songs that made us feel like we couldn’t forward most of them.  Message me if you want to get a critique of your song from our perspective.  But know that this if very subjective and you might not like our answers.

davej56
@davej56
07/04/25 12:40:02PM
23 posts

B. Chad Brock - 90's Country


Song Pitch 3 - Closed 7/3/25

Hello all!

Below are the selections for the above named pitch.

Selected songs are:

Song                                                             Member          

Bye                                                                Vaughan Ray

Copperhead Mountain                          Slynn

Back When I Believed                            Slynn

Congratulations to those who were selected!  And I thank everyone that submitted.

There were more than enough songs on this pitch for us to send five.  However, there were various issues with the songs we didn’t select.  Some were weak lyrics and some were formatting issues like running the bridge directly behind a verse and throwing us off.  Please watch your formats!  Message me if you want to get a critique of your song from our perspective. But understand that this is very subjective, so you might not like my answers.

 

davej56
@davej56
06/28/25 04:17:53AM
23 posts

C. Ray H. - Country - Closed


Song Pitch 3 - Closed 7/3/25

The producer never responded to my email.  Closing this pitch!

davej56
@davej56
06/27/25 10:57:31PM
23 posts

B. Mackenzie Sol -- Pop


Song Pitch 2 - Closed

Hello all!

Below are the selections for the above named pitch.

Selected songs are:

Song                                                             Member          

Numb                                                  Travis Myles

Left 2 Right                                         Travis Myles

Didn't Mean To Fall                             Travis Myles

You're Always There                           Gary Clute

You're Givin Good Lovin                     Vaughan Ray

I Still Like Living                                  Vaughan Ray

Congratulations to those who were selected!  And I thank everyone that submitted.


updated by @davej56: 06/27/25 10:58:05PM
davej56
@davej56
06/25/25 05:18:32PM
23 posts

A. Kameron Ross -- Various -read below


Song Pitch 4 - Open until 7/11/25

Grade One View Music is looking for songs for artist Kameron Ross. Recording will be August/Sept 2025.  America’s Got Talent, Dallas Entertainment Awards – Best Country Artist 2023 & 2024, Dallas Voice – Best Local Performer 2021, 2022, 2024. DC Pride 2023 performer. Please listen to older DSP releases for pitch ideas. Pop/country leaning. New styles welcomed as well such as Dance + Country, Reggaeton + Country. Also looking for “Texas country” songs similar to Josh Abbott Band. Finally looking for a bluegrass duet and/or a pop country duet to be performed with Rupaul’s Drag Race television show contestants.

THEY WANT LYRICS SUBMITTED WITH THE SONGS SO MAKE SURE YOUR LYRICS MATCH THE DEMO AND ARE FORMATTED PROPERLY!

This entry expires July 11th, 2025.

Submit only your complete songs (not just lyrics) with demos by replying to this entry with the Songpress Music URL or just the name for the song(s) you wish to pitch. SUBMIT NO MORE THAN YOUR TOP THREE SONGS IN EACH CATEGORY!   

See the Site Blog tab on the home page for submission instructions and song judging criteria.

I will select and submit at least what I deem to be the top 5 entries to the record company.  Please note that once submitted, it's a waiting game. We may or may not hear back from the record company as to their decision.


updated by @davej56: 06/26/25 03:30:55PM
davej56
@davej56
06/20/25 06:52:15PM
23 posts

Jesus Loves You, Karen


Christian/Gospel Songs - Male Vocal

Thank you Kyle for your gentle and kind response.  Glad I didn't offend you.  The whole purpose of this forum is for us to help each other as best we can, with expecting nothing but perhaps a thank you for it.  Of course, you are welcome to use whatever I provided in lyrics or idea if you want to, with no strings attached.  I'm just glad you found something in what I said to be helpful.  I look forward to the revisions in lyric and rough demo.  Go get 'em champ!

davej56
@davej56
06/20/25 06:36:48PM
23 posts

C. Ray H. - Country - Closed


Song Pitch 3 - Closed 7/3/25

Well, thank you the two of you that have questioned this post.  There is just not enough information for us to be accurate in our pitches, and it's clear that you read it and paid attention. The lack of information is why I passed it over for a couple of weeks.  But with considering your interest, I have emailed the producer for more information. Hopefully, they will be forthcoming with it very soon.  If not, I will remove the post so we aren't shooting in the dark!  I should have done that in the beginning!  Sorry I didn't!

davej56
@davej56
06/20/25 12:01:40PM
23 posts

Jesus Loves You, Karen


Christian/Gospel Songs - Male Vocal

Hello Kyle!

Great song!  And please forgive me, but I'm a notorious re-writer.  I've done a quick rewrite to say it how I would.  Doesn't mean there's anything wrong with what you wrote; it just means I would have done it different.  But, who the heck am I?

Anyway, I'm trying this and hoping I don't offend you.  I'm hoping I might have said something you could use.  If not, please ignore me.  Again, you've written a good song.  My only strong nit is to say "our Father" rather than "my manager." He's her Father too! Bring her into the family.  And as a minor point, you're not quite conversational in a spot or two.  LInes 2 and 3 don't flow well for me.

Beyond me being me--good job!

Jesus Loves You As You Are


(Verse)


You act like you’re entitled
but your demands are never earned
Still we must meet your standards 
so a Karen's what you're termed


Some call you controlling
in all the things you do
But I've spoken to our Father
and this message is for you


(Chorus)


Jesus loves you as you are
with your pride, anger, and arrogance
He sees into your hurting heart
that’s suffered time and time again


Your life has been cruel
you’ve felt lost in the dark

But never let it fool you
Jesus loves you as you are

(Verse)
No need to be demeaning
No need to put folks down
Let go the hurt you’re clinging
You can turn this all around

You are a child of God
and a sister to us all
Cling to the soul you’ve got
heed to the spirit’s call

(Repeat Chorus)

(Bridge)
The scars upon your heart
can easily be healed
Your layers of protection
can easily be peeled

Just reach up to our Father
he’s waiting there for you
His word will get you farther
In everything you do

(Repeat Chorus)


(Outro)
Yes, Jesus loves you as you are


updated by @davej56: 06/20/25 12:07:04PM
davej56
@davej56
06/18/25 07:25:06PM
23 posts

C. Ray H. - Country - Closed


Song Pitch 3 - Closed 7/3/25

Independent singer is looking for songs.  The artist is Ray H. Preference:’90s country. See: ?????

This entry expires July 3rd, 2025.

Submit only your complete songs (not just lyrics) with demos by replying to this entry with the Songpress Music URL or just the name for the song(s) you wish to pitch. SUBMIT NO MORE THAN YOUR TOP THREE SONGS!   

See the Site Blog tab on the home page for submission instructions and song judging criteria.

I will select and submit at least what I deem to be the top 5 entries to the record company.  Please note that once submitted, it's a waiting game. We may or may not hear back from the record company as to their decision.


updated by @davej56: 07/04/25 10:43:06AM
davej56
@davej56
06/18/25 07:11:38PM
23 posts

B. Chad Brock - 90's Country


Song Pitch 3 - Closed 7/3/25

SSM Nashville is looking for songs.  The artist is Chad Brock. Preference:’90s country. uptempo.  See:  Chad Brock YouTube

This entry expires July 3rd, 2025.

Submit only your complete songs (not just lyrics) with demos by replying to this entry with the Songpress Music URL or just the name for the song(s) you wish to pitch. SUBMIT NO MORE THAN YOUR TOP THREE SONGS!   

See the Site Blog tab on the home page for submission instructions and song judging criteria.

I will select and submit at least what I deem to be the top 5 entries to the record company.  Please note that once submitted, it's a waiting game. We may or may not hear back from the record company as to their decision.


updated by @davej56: 07/04/25 10:43:06AM
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